Month: June 2015

Comparison

June 23, 2015 / / 1 Comment

The comparison between dying to be famous and murdered by my boyfriend. There both to do with crime;because some parts are like the same and most things are different and am going to tell you about it.

First am going to talk about how there both stalkers. In murdered by my boyfriend Ashley (the girl) didn’t want to go out with Reece (the boy) no-more because he kept abusing her her so she had enough and said i don’t want to be with you no-more, so Reece starts to stalk her all the time.And in dying to be famous he stalks people and kills them straight away mostly people who hated him in school. But why are they doing this?

Dying to be famous he stalks people, the people who hated him in school the people who was being rude to him the people who bullied him and now he’s killing people hes becoming famous people are starting to respect him hes just doing it for power. In Murdered by my boyfriend hes abusing his powers like he will be like answer the phone, shut up do this do that. What else?

There both boys, but the age is different because Reece is 27 and poppy’s 15. Reece has just killed one person but poppy killed various of people. The way Reece killed his girlfriend was sad because the baby was in the next room crying, when he heard the baby crying he should of stopped but no he carried on hitting her with the iron board. Dying to be famous is different because he kills lots of people and strangles them to death.

Dialouge

June 22, 2015 / / 2 Comments

They’re on the phone.

 

Bobby: yo, D What you on today?

D: Nothing much bro. Got no motive.

Bobby: Argh, am going front-line still.

D: Who’s at front-line?

Bobby: The team man.

D: Sn im Going to be there soon!.

Bobby: SHO!

 

Frontline.

 

Kaine: what you man saying?

Kads: Nothing still

G1: Nothing much

Bobby: Just Out’ere

Kaine: What we doing today?

G1: I don’t know, todays dead no catties.

Kads; Trust I don’t even mind because I get the most anyway.

Bobby: Shut up man always talking after you’re the biggest stunt.

Kads: You don’t get girls!.

Bobby: Yhyhyh.

G1: FAM, yesterday them opps came down here yesterday and took pictures and said they are on our block.

Kaine: WHAT!! There moist they came in the morning as well, Wastemans.

D: Who was it doe?

G1: The Town Yutes!

D: But who doe fam!?

G1: Grizzy and that.

Kads: Come lets ride out?

Kaine: Come you man on it.

Everyone Together: Yeah Man!

Kaine: G1 Call barnes for what skengs we need please.

G1: Say no more.

They’re On The Phone.

 

G1:Yo.

Barnes: Yo, what you need.?

G1: Skengs ak.

Barnes: Which Ones?

G1: 2 Shotties & 2 Pistols.

Barnes: SNM ill drop it off.

G1: SHO!.

Off The Phone.

 

Kaine: Call Sally.

G1: Why?

Kaine: Bring Man.

G1: Say no more.

They’re on the phone.

 

Sally: Who’s this

G1: Its G1 man

Sally: O, What’s good?

G1: Nothing much still

Sally: Good, so why you calling man?

G1: Basically the town yutes came to frontline and took pictures and said they’re on our block.

Sally: O Yeah, R.block Showed me yesterday still.

G1: Yeah he’s the that showed me.

Sally: There’re moist doe cause it was Sunday morning when everyone was sleeping  who has time for that loooool.

G1: Wastemans but anyway I need you and your team still.

Sally: Who you want?

G1: Bring Big A, DQ, Drops, R.block, L1, Fat T, T.rex, Jose and Jeremiah.

Sally: Say noting.

 

Off the phone.

 

 

2 Hours later they all meet at frontline.

 

D: Who’s jumping in the 4 door?

Kaine: Am driving.

G1: You got no license.

Kaine: So what, shut up it don’t matter your riding your ped anyways.

G1. True

Bobby: Im getting in the 4 door.

D: Am coming in.

Kads: Mans jumping in.

Sally: I am.

G1: What about the others.

Sally: They all gave peds.

G1: Say nothing bro.

Kaine: What are you man ready yeah?

D: Come lets go.

 

20 Minutes they hit town.

 

Kaine is just shooting in the air, everyone’s just running

G1 is chasing people on his ped.

DQ Catches someone and stabs him in the heart so he dies

He caught Y.J.bandz.

 

Bobby: What you man saying. Wasteman

G1: Bloody wasteman.

Kaine: THERES GRIZZY!

G1: SHO mans going to do that his not cutting from my ped.

Bobby: Just catch the guy fam.

G1: OK!

D: LOL!

G1 has caught grizzy!

 

 

DQ: Why you switching sides you neek.

Jose: Bang him fam

Kaine: You’re a neek uno

Grizzy: Shut up

Kaine: Your buzzin we have the straps you don’t

 

A witness saw everything that happen

So she called the police.

 

G1: Buss a cap in his head bruv.

Kaine: Am doing it.

Kads: Let me do it please.

Someboddy unknown came running it was grizzys friend.

 

G1: WHOS THAT!.

HE shot G1 In hes arm.

 

Kads: Kads shot him in his Leg.

Kaine: Shot grizzy.

 

Everyone ran out the scene but they couldn’t because the police came and everyone got arrested except for sally d and bobby because they got away.

 

This Genre was crime and gang. G1 Got 15 years, Kaine goy 20 years Dq got 5 years because he snitched.

Now and then

January 26, 2015 / / 2 Comments

The  memories are so clear,  I can feel the heat, the watery salty water dripping down my face and all over my chest and the rest of my body, its boiling but I love it, the sun never seemed to hide, my family comforts me and I never feel homesick, I even feel at home, the kids play football outside enjoying themselves, laughing when they one of their skills go to another level and they skill up each other, I watch and I find it funny and interesting they ask me to play and agree. I play and enjoy myself. The game finished the sun has finally hibernated.  After I’m done I go back home and my legs and my arms are no longer responding,  my stomach assaults me and so I know its time to eat. The food is lovely, it’s so original and different in a good way, because the culture is different from England’s , I love the food its special and it tastes sweat, it’s an delightful,distinctive,sweat and tasty taste. I have made up with my stomach and so I go outside in garden it’s so much cooler there than the breeze is relaxing,  the perfect temperature, so I sit down and relax sit there lie down for hours, with the wind being my perfect companion.

I arrive back to that same country several years later . There are vast more amount of cars in the city, the city is more smoky and polluted. Its more crowned and populated, the technology has improved. Buts it’s not only that it feels different, the family which I adored and left twice the size of me is somehow shrank. The football pitch which me and friends played in until we couldn’t play any more is the size for kids. My friends now play now PS3 and now they no longer go outside to play football, but instead study more in their rooms

The vivid memories of a beautiful city and intangible land has been dismantled. What was reminded as a cleanest road I had ever seen, now has more homeless on this one road then they are with homes, the pigeons lark around during the day and the rats during the night. I went into the fields I see crows attack the crops which must its hard for the farmers,I also see the chicken and how they are slaughtered, knowing that I begin to appreciate my food,I learn to do so.The litter from what I reminder doesn’t even exist , The people who live here I generally considered that they were all friendly and kind, but see the news and how violent and wicked people are. I also considered my country to be safe but people steal anything possible

But the forgotten but loved sunlight striking upon my chest, and sweaty salty liquid pouring down my chest, the cool relaxing night temperature comforting me until the sunlight tag in again. The disguised heavenly land appeared to be tropical like city.

It’s clear that memories which were not exactly true , a child fooled by his poor observations, brainwashed of his past and blinded by the harsh truth, heaven does not exist here for humanity lives here and so imperfection lurks. This is no heaven its Africa where I would still go to visit again, where the food gives a sense that your finally home,where sun shines for hours where you can be yourself and have fun, and when the moon finally tags in its sense of relaxation feels which that can never altered however old you get.

June 9, 2015 / / 0 Comments

It builds suspense because it looks like they’re having a friendly talk because the way they’re looking eye to eye but really they’re not having a friendly talk.Tom Chaney killed Mattie’s dad.Tom is about to kill Mattie but Mattie kills Chaney. We.We didn’t know that was going to happen.In Homicide you killed someone and you get caught so because you said “it was self-defence he just came at me” So you admit  you killed someone so you are going to serve the consequences.